All Comments on 'Kimmie'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot!

Wonderful story!

slm59slm59about 6 years ago
That was HOT!

I would love to see you continue Randy and Kimmie's story. Thanks!

ashleycooperashleycooperabout 6 years ago
could go either way

this has such a nice, clean ending that it could easily work as a stand-alone story, but it could also work as the first of a multi-part collection. If you're feeling another chapter or two, I will certainly watch for it :-)

skywriterxxxskywriterxxxabout 6 years ago
delightful story...

well done!! Wow! A captivating read, good pace, easy to follow. And, as mentioned before, a great start to a series! Keep up the amazing work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
and Celeste did not know what's going on?...

I'd be surprised if she did not!

I'm not big on multiple chapters, but I might give this one a 'go'.

AdamdavidsonAdamdavidsonover 4 years ago
Music Teacher fantasy

I have taught guitar and violin lessons and can relate to the sexiness of playing music and singing with a woman. I never got to play out the fantasy so enjoyed the gradual build up and eventual ‘climax’.

SoCalAshleySoCalAshleyover 2 years ago

I would take guitar lessons from Randy anytime. What a well written story. I think Randy's and Kimmie's story can very easily stand alone. I always had a thing for musicians. Perhaps a story about Randy and a female groupie.

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

The bedroom scene was hot! Loved it! Good reading!

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