All Comments on 'Kindness Given'

so how did she find him? how did she know about the picture? how did she of his past?

This story deserves another chapter... or several... I love William's story, and I want to hear more!!

Your characters are interesting, and may pester you for more life and adventure to complete the excellent beginning.

the rest of your story held me. I thought it was very well done. It is the type of plot that interests me, also. The, I like to call it, Alfred Hitchkock type of story, where the viewers/readers imagination fills in better than mere words or pictures.

I liked it very much. Thank you

had you only given a tiny bit more...so many mysteries; no closure, no resolution, no reward for a man who did the very best he could in his confusion...such a fine story that could have been wonderful.

J in California