All Comments on 'Kindness Reaps Its Rewards Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Brian

This is where Brian's chest hair would be soooo sexy -- a real plus as the girls stoke the hairy areas of his chest and treasure trail. What an evening's entertainment! Brian seems like a real catch!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
name change

The story continues with Heather, Tracy, Susan and Samantha but as it gets interesting the names change. Firstly is the appearance of Sonya and then Stacy and then without the blink of an eye, they're gone again.

You need to keep an eye on what names enter your sex scenes as the reader gets confused.

Great story though

OlebillOlebillover 6 years ago
Why

Why mess up a good thing between two cousins with other people. Soonnas that people were coming over I quit reading. Looking forward to seeing the cousins develop.

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