All Comments on 'Kinetic'

After years of searching, I have found this story again. I love the abilities, makes for so much potential.

Proved absolute power corrupts absolutely. Both melanie and god had no qualms at the end changing everything. They had no right to do that.

For the past few days have been using all my free moments to read more of your story. I enjoyed the read .the suspense if if he would fuck up real

Bad was good.enjoyed the anal desires and respect of the reality and consequences.

Still would like to know why the girls parents were so messed up , but not enough to ruin the story.Anger and Sorrow definitely have got me thinking and trying to understand.have found that anger and proving a just point can bring to change.

Thank you for a wonderfull story.

>>There is one detail that you missed, while you gave humanity a replacement for the moon, you took away the Lagrange points. L4 and L5 are no longer stable. By changing the mass ratios between the earth and its new moon, L4 and L5 became unstable.

You are wrong anonymous.

>>If you had a system where two planets were comparable in mass/size, and only separated by a short distance, you could have what's known as either a binary or double planet system. Recent studies indicate that this is legitimately possible.

~https://www.forbes.com/sites/startswithabang/2019/08/13/yes-two-planets-can-both-share-the-same-orbit/#816f3e22b8de

About the third time I've read this.

Like some of the others, the physics was way over my head but obviously you have either researched it or know it quite well. Be that as it may, I really liked the story for the most part. Still not sure why Melanie's parents were such dicks, but they did get their just rewards, kind of. I can understand that in the heat of the moment and with the anger he did what he did. Had to go back and read that part again where the Detectives were doing their investigations. Just another one for the un-closed cases that will never be resolved.

page 13 was weird as fuck

TLDR if I knew how bad this story was I would have never read it.

One of the first stories I read here,still one of the best

Tremendous story, even if the language felt a bit archaic at times

This story took me to a place, conceptually, that otherwise may never have considered….. thus the beauty of sci-fi. This story far exceeded my expectations of entertainment value. Loved it!!

What the hell was page 12 & 13. Great up until then. That’s when I quit reading. Ruined a great story and sorry I wasted my time! LM