All Comments on 'King of the Cul-De-Sac Ch. 02'

This is awful.

Way to go finally a good story does she wear high heels for him all the time hope so!

Writing in 1st person is just dumb.

A pretty good story up to this point. I hope there will be future chapters.

I don't know what all does anonymous readers problems are, a great rough BDSM incest story and from my point of few I wouldn't mind if its getting rougher and rougher

Are Not Erotic!

Chapter 2 was even better chapter 1! I hope you keep this pace going forward. Also ignor the anom bots, you have more than 20 people save this story and a good rating!

You are potentially a great writer.

Please understand that the mother/son incest stories almost NEVER work when additional males are included in the story.

A son who has seduced his mother would keep her for his exclusive use of her mouth, ass and cunt, may be even knocking her up to take full control of her womb.

If there is a sister, then the son would make the mother help him seduce her as well.

But to simply gift the mother to his friends is not only not realistic but also shows a lack of understanding of the mom/son relationship, the oldest and the greatest taboo in the world.

You are a fag who ruined this story....why share? It comes off as gay

Any fucking kid that would treat his mother like that needs his balls cut off and shoved up his ass.

Then it went downhill - fast. The son was an idiot to start sharing his mom like that. I don't think a normal teen would ever do that...at least until the 'new' had worn off. It boggles the mind what wonderfully twisted things he could put her through all by himself. No, that ruined it for me, and it made the whole thing's pace unutterably slow. Just think: bondage, nipple rings, zoo, w/s, and you blew it, forgetting that you're writing for possible fans, not to get off on your personal bent the very first day. More imagination, please. But the original plot, though not original, was a good, proven one. And come on, a pastor? Yes, it's a fantasy, but way over the top. And far too much of the same things. I skipped half of it. Give it another shot...with better detail and way fewer extraneous males.

Writer making story joking on mon son incest but reading the story on ch1 I think it going on the moment son incest and their sex adventures but writer prove me wrong

After sex seation with own mother he serve his mother as sex slave all over town for satisfie man's desire it's not realistic reader deserve more of that junk.

if you let every fat slob you run across fuck her?

Its OK to be gay you can suck sperm right out of the guy directly, no need to pretended to like eating it out of a woman

Great story apart from letting other men fuck her. I mean why the hell would you want to put the effort into training her for his pleasure then letting other guys use her might as well visit and Pauly for sloppy seconds with some trailer park whore as it would be less Hassel and no where near as socially damning

So shes been "his" whore for two days and already let six other people use her? Whats the point of having a slut if you are going to share her with everyone you run across

Was really hard and horny, enjoying stroking my cock to mom being whore trained. Then ugly, gross fat characters introduce. Cock shrunk. Stopped reading. I don't get it. In my fantasy world everyone's gorgeous. Just saying. I wish it'd not gone down this direction. Like I said was thoroughly enjoying up til then.

Now this is better. We get to see mother in her full dress as a submissive slut. Some excellent sex elements, and we see a ‘gangbang’, although not my favourite development; I much prefer one on one. Even so, this was an ideally written mum/son story, for which many thanks, and well worth five stars.

he train her mom to be a public whore.

i have dropped many stories like this.

i will rate this 0 star.

He's no better than the preacher that raped her and the delivery driver wouldn't have touched her due to possibly being kicked in the nuts and/or arrested for sexual assault.

Wow this was really stupid.

I don't get the appeal of this to be perfectly honest. I mean she's just being used up and fucked by other random people, whilst remaining totally subservient to her son. Is that really satisfying to both of them? I guess I just don't understand that perspective. But if it works for them then by all means I suppose.