by JennaMonroe
The character development is wonderful, but the misspellings are a distraction.
This was a sexy short story, I love the exhibitionism, but my favorite part was at the very end!
"Mike lifted his wrist and looked at his watch, "You have about thirty seconds to be naked and in the hot tub or..."
"Or?"
"Or I'll make you wait." He smiled and I laughed, but immediately opened the door. Delayed gratification is really not my thing and I know he'll do it!"
I had to giggle a little!
So far this series is amazing!! It’s hot and sweet. I’m definitely hoping for more chapters!
the only weak point was the anal sex; very little excitement about that, which is too bad. It could have been yet another turning point in the story, opening new avenues of kink.
bringing in other people ruins the taboo heat of their relationship, not technically related, at that point, or the special bond they have developed.