All Comments on 'Kink Ep. 03: Exhibition'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Really hot. Loved it. Hope there is more to cum.

SWT3SWT3over 6 years ago
Good but needs better editing

The character development is wonderful, but the misspellings are a distraction.

Deacon051Deacon051over 6 years ago
Tantalizing kink

A nice ebb and flow, and hot as always!

spoiler22mspoiler22mabout 6 years ago
Sexy

This was a sexy short story, I love the exhibitionism, but my favorite part was at the very end!

"Mike lifted his wrist and looked at his watch, "You have about thirty seconds to be naked and in the hot tub or..."

"Or?" 

"Or I'll make you wait." He smiled and I laughed, but immediately opened the door. Delayed gratification is really not my thing and I know he'll do it!"

I had to giggle a little!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So freaking hot!

So far this series is amazing!! It’s hot and sweet. I’m definitely hoping for more chapters!

bigreddog543bigreddog543almost 5 years ago

the only weak point was the anal sex; very little excitement about that, which is too bad. It could have been yet another turning point in the story, opening new avenues of kink.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

bringing in other people ruins the taboo heat of their relationship, not technically related, at that point, or the special bond they have developed.

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