All Comments on 'Kinky Sex with Dad Pt. 01'

That was hot. Who cane in? Waiting on pins and needles.

Then the boyfriend walked in and caught her and her dad...... Or it was her mom that caught them?

Yes loving this story!!! Can't wait for more!!

Can't wait for more !

I bet it'S either the mom or some other relative, the boyfriend just walking to the parents bedroom is kinda weird...

Use actual words. Lol is not how someone would respond. If they are being sarcastic, a singular Ha will work. If they are actually laughing, something like: Laughing I replied, "Come into the living room while I make a hot coffee for you," and walked into the kitchen. Also, idk is not something you would find people saying to each other. Try thinking how you would say things when you are face to face with someone rather than how you would text them.

Please don't write like you're texting your friends. "lol" and "idk" Have no place here. It was a real turn off.

lived it, especially the end. can't wait for Part 2.

the story line is fine, but if I have to proof read in my head, it's distracting..

All that is needed now is a great middle and end

Constant mistakes throughout which made it an infuriating read, proof read next time! And don't use text language

ESL, I presume...?

Most people look at these stories to cum all over their hands. NOT to analyze the damn story.

I was so close to cumming. Make a part 2. Pretty good.

Part 1 ends with dad & daughter being caught fucking

So what happened to part 2 who caught them & what happened??

Does she live with Mom & Dad, or is it Her apartment, & Dad has a room, should he need to stay over, and Nate came home early, from his vaca? Ready for pt 2

Who irrupted?

how dare you literally --- do so damn good this story . than never return finish . along staying gone never bothering doing other stories . HOW DARE YOU LITERALLY ............... this person that made this story obviously doesn't care finish like ever . along also doesn't care : if someone comes along continues it even finishes ..... ..... ..... ..... SOMEONE NEEDS CONTINUE THIS . SOMEONE NEEDS FINISH THIS

I don’t mind the fkn acronyms when I text. But this isn’t the venue for lol, or idk. That’s where you lost me. Improve your writing skills, or don’t bother.

HOWEVER, it would be nice to have more than just a modicum of English/grammar in the tales. When I have to mentally proof the entire story, I exit, and find something else to read.

IF English is not your forte, say so in your introduction.

Fantastic. Made me cum hard