by kmakemepurr
A good first story. Let's continue it. Disregard the induvidual that called you a chauvinistic pig. He's probably gay.
I agree with "Good Start" about the likely gayness of the author of the crazed first comment below. Hope to see more of your story soon, since it goes in some directions that are very interesting, and it's off to a hot start. The challenge of this kind of story, as you know, is to find ways to keep at least one one partner at least somewhat "reluctant," even though the sex gets increasingly hot, but I'm sure that you're up to the challenge.
I loved this story and I am a woman. The complainer at the bottom of the comments should probably refrain from reading non-consensual stories if they are not prepared for a bit of edginess. It is a freaking story, not a guide to life. I happen to enjoy reading fictional scenarios I would never want in real life (unless as a roleplay), and that doesn't make me an abused woman. Just a kinky one.
come on you have to finish this awesome story,or i'am going to have to......?
Why didn't you continue to write? I would have liked to see her husband pound the piss out of this asshole And tell his wife to take a hike!
Very good start. Erotic and believable. You should continue this. Please
This was a steamy hot, well written story. I hope there is more to come.
Really well done. Amazing you fit all that onto one page. Would really love for this to continue...