All Comments on 'Kirsten Finds Her Inner Fucktoy'

by burninglurv

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Shame about the over-use of 'nice'

It's a meaningless word, and it detracts from an otherwise lovely vignette.

HamsterHamsterover 12 years ago
"Inner" Fuck Toy"

The title implied discovery. The story.....not so much. Kirsten knew exactly what she was from the first sentence of the story and didn't grow or discover anything at all about herself. Hot as it was, it was a disappointment.

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