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Click hereMike just glared at me. Melissa embraced me from behind. "Maybe we should take the kinkiness back to our place."
I purred as fingers probed my pussy from behind. "What about the gay cowboy?"
"Maybe we can convince him we have something better to offer." She whispered in my ear.
We gathered our things, and left Mike cursing in the dungeon as we headed for the door.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoDidn't see one typo or anything else to interrupt the story. It was great. I took some lessons and appreciate your good thoughts. For a short story this was excellent. I plan on using your outline on a similar problem I have. The only thing I can think of is you might have brought in a dog.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThis story is awesome, winner is you.
Too many of these stories ramble into nowhere. An ending is nice, but a good revenge story is the ultimate money shot.
verbicideabout 8 years agoI love this! It made me laugh so hard. I am male and rather dominant in the bedroom, but the misogyny of so many of these non-con stories is so apparent that I think a little revenge tale is just what the doctor ordered to take the steam out of some of the pasty, mouth breathers who drool over the outright rape and burn-the-bitch revenge porn this genre is swamped with.
Could the story have gone on longer? You bet. Could there have been some improvements in the presentation? Sure. Still, it's a good effort, it's freaking hilarious and it sends a much needed message of potential revenge to the veritable army of limp dicked little toads lurking hereabouts.
