by Addicted2Writing
the others pussy. You did make 1 big mistake going from nude in the tub to dressed in bed. Plus I wanted more pussy eating & tongue fucking so each could get a mouthful of sweet honey for the holiday. Still a "nice" story just did not go far enough.
I love lesbian stories, ladies are so sensitive, they know what their partner needs instinctively. Not like us men, but I am learning from you please keep up the good work, maybe one day I will be good enough for a woman and love her as she needs to be loved. In my next life I am definitely coming back as a woman and more than likely a lesbian!
I have often dreamed of this happening. It may never happen foe real but now I can re-read this and imagine it was real. This was not only beautifully written but highly erotic !!!
Thanks for pointing that out! I will submit that to get fixed. Much appreciated.
After reviewing, I did point out she'd slipped on the dress while Rose slept.
I did make the mistake! It has been corrected and resubmitted.
Oh, and I will be continuing this. Though there won't be much substance, there will be some more action between the girls!
This is a realistic scenario. Many women have had similar experiences. It is good to experience and learn how to enjoy without dick
I got your point the first time.
1st: If you didn't like it, why go back to the story and send me a private email repeating it? (I don't want an answer) If you didn't like, move on.
2nd: It is my choice if I choose to delete your non-constructive and useless comment. The option is there so I took it.
3rd: Do not speak for others.
4th: If you feel it is the wrong category, there's a much nicer way to point that out.
5th: Have a nice day
TO OTHER READERS: Please ignore my comment above. The comment was rather abusive and beginning on staking-ish, so forgive my 'meanness.'
At frst, I thought this story was sexy and sweet. And then I got to the end and realised that it is smoking fucking hot and sweet.