All Comments on 'Kissing Cousins'

I think that he should "keep Holly out of trouble" by marrying her after she gets pregnant with his child. Keep the stories coming!

Nice little story. Descriptions were nice, and the author's notes, while somewhat in violation of the fourth wall, were funny. The sex was written very well, and you did a swell job of painting the scenario. I definitely enjoyed it, but I think this story had two weaknesses.<br><br>Clark's frustration with Holly's essential cockblocking, while realistic, put them at odds and didn't lend itself to the romp that ensued shortly after. Clark made it clear he was pissed off with her, and didn't want to see her. I think if you wrote more about how he was attracted to her, it would've made more sense. I.e., if you played up his attraction to her despite his frustration, I think the scene would've made more sense. The way you wrote it, it was as though his anger with her simply dissipated without a trace.<br><br>The second and final weakness I found was its brevity. I think the story would benefited itself if you took more time building things up between Holly and Clark. The dynamic between Holly's friends and Clark was good, but underplayed, and I think you missed a lot of potential with regard to the complications that could've arisen. I certainly think it would've been more effective if Clark got with Nicole, causing Holly's jealousy to build even more. We were already given tastes of how she wanted him with the not-so-subtle brushing of her breasts on his arm, and the impromptu lip-kissing, and I really think things could've improved if you extended the story and let Holly's feelings simmer for a while longer.<br><br>Alas, don't confuse my feedback. I did enjoy this story. Quite a bit, in fact. I just thought it could've been improved if things went a slightly different, more scenic route.

I just wish there had been more of it.

waiting for part 2

A sequel with her friends?

it should have taken longer (weeks, months or more) for him to forgive her, realisticly she should have had to work to get him to even talk to her much less be around her or fuck her.

My cousin Glenda had a boyfriend, she was 18 he 21, I was 20. We had got on since about age 12 when they moved close to our family. She rang me asked me to come over, I did, she was crying, her boyfriend Richard had broken up with her, why what was the problem, he complained that she wouldn't have sex with him, they agreed on oral but he told her she was hopeless. Hopeless, how, well I put it in my mouth, he pushed my head, I nearly choke and pull away. He got angry, told me he can get it elsewhere. What a grub, let him, she cried but I love him. If he gave me another chance, or I could practice I am sure we would be o.k. Trying to make light of it I jokingly said well you can practice on me. She looked at me and smiled, I knew you would help me. I looked shocked, I was joking, she said please, I'm not, starting to cry. O.k, O.k lets see what we can do. Show me exactly what you 2 do. Well, first he plays with my breasts, undoing her bra, this gets him hard, Nice breasts, well touch them, I did, her nipples hardened, oh you do it nicer than him, your not so rough, as my cock hardened. She undid my zip, my cock sprung up, her hand circled my cock, wow, your much more round. she lowered her head to my cock, then just put it in her mouth, not moving. I told her move your tongue, she did, now slowly move it in and out, slowly, I touched her head , pushing lightly, then removed my hand, that's it, keep going like that but now when you move back suck it, wow, that's it, she was doing it well. I reached down between her legs,they opened I felt her warmth through her panties. Stop, she pulled up, does he touch you, no, let him finger you, take off your panties, she did, now lets go again, same as before she lowered her head, I touched her pussy, her head shot up, I pushed it back down, my finger running along her pussy, wet, touching her clit, she moved faster on my cock, my finger rubbing her clit,she jammed her legs closed, shaking and I held her head as my cum shot into her mouth, she tried to swallow it all but I had to let her head go, my cum dripping from her mouth. She looked at me, a bit surprised I think, I said nothing wrong with the way you do it but now you have to be careful because now is the time he will want to have sex with you, she looked at me, do you, well that's not the issue, she insisted, do you stroking my still hard cock, well of course, show me as she lay back, her legs spread. I was still horny,see you want it, he must wear a condom, make sure as I got one from my wallet, no don't, its o.k. its the right time, I wont get pregnant, put it in me. I moved down, her smell was of wanting, I flicked my tongue over her pussy, oh, what are you doing, my tongue lapping along her very juicy slit. I moved up, positioned my cock and slowly entered her, until I hit resistance, so big, oh so big. I looked right at her, now this will hurt a bit but I have to do this and pulled back and gave a sharp quick push, she screamed as my cock sank further into her. I held her, not moving, she was crying, I kissed her and began to fuck, at first she didn't move, then I felt her respond, that's it take my cock, her legs raised around me as I fucked her deep, ohh, ohh, don't stop as I plowed her pussy and then she went rigid, a high pitched squeal and then relaxed, I lifted her legs, fucked her hard and fast giving her what cum I had left, her pussy tight around me. I lay on top of her until my cock began to shrink, I moved away, there was quite a mess to clean up. She went back to Richard, he followed her round after that like a lost puppy. They did get married, they have 3 kids. As a relative, Richard talks to me, telling me how hot in bed she was. I just smile. Her blowjobs have improved out of sight and we both smile at how much like her second child, a son, looks like I did when I was young.

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To fittucker87, I think you should take a little more time building the story, but I really liked what I read

there has to be more to this with her friends in the mix too.

You forgot to have him cum while fucking...

Could have been good, but not much creativity there. Kinda lame.