All Comments on 'Kissing the Boss'

by PrincessKiwi

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
Interesting plot contortions...

... and very well written. I look forward to more!

water_sidewater_sidealmost 15 years ago
Deliciously cruel !

So very hot. The imagery and passion leap off the page; leaving my mind whirling with cock-twitching thoughts of pleasure, pain and humiliation. Wonderful stuff!

PrincessKiwiPrincessKiwialmost 15 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks to everyone who has given great feedback. I'm glad the internal complexities of the narrator have come across well and aren't too confusing. I assure you - there is much more to come!

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