by Bowoodstock
Your story is still strong and very well written. I like the characters and the why the are iterating very believable. Awesome job. mechmanas
man are you doing great with this story, if anyone starts complaining any time soon about no sex itll probally because the guy hasnt raped the cat yet. with the way you are writing this story sex at the wrong time could RUIN THE WHOLE STORY, so please continue as you are and this will end as the great story it is now
so far your story IS developing very nicely . . and it is very refreshing to see the cultural contrasts you have shown between the two characters . . she is not just another human wearing a fursuit . . . very well done :-)
Perfectly paced and with a very strong voice. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm loving the character development-the bickering-getting to know one another!!
Phhhttt! SEX-SMEX!!
The brain is an organ too, keep it coming!!
Ahem....Next??
:-)
A faint yelp, eh? Did our naked war goddess catch something for dinner? Can't wait to find out...
I agree with the other comments. I like the story you are telling. Thankyou.
There must be more. And faster.
You make me want to get back into writing...
Absolutely awesome, well written and loving the character dynamics! I agree with others here.. sex at the wrong time will just turn this into a second rate story. I know how hard it is to write, but PLEASE keep going - it's worth waiting for :)
The brain is the very best sexual organ and you're stimulating it wonderfully :)
.. and as I said for Ch. 2.. morrrr.. morrrr..morrrrrr :)
I just pretty much have to say what Herservantboy.
Well paced and enticing. I would like to hear a little more on what their surroundings look like.
I just pretty much have to say what Herservantboy.
Well paced and enticing. I would like to hear a little more on what their surroundings look like.
Sorry about the double comment. Page crashed and I did not think it was uploaded.
What with all of this talk about the importance of names, it was only natural that I looked up (what the Internet would have me believe is) the meanings behind the names of the good Mr. Medic.
Eric (supposedly) comes from an Old Norse name, Eiríkr, which is derived from the elements ei "ever" and ríkr "ruler". So that's kinda interesting.
But the real fun is in knowing that the name Connor can be traced back to a Gaelic name which means (wait for it...) "dog lover" or "wolf lover." Gotta love it when that happens.
That said story development is very good.
in Nivens world's, a weakling Feline alien male Kizin; captures and falls in love with a Human female Space Navy officer
The civilization who invented the minute and second had a number system that added a digit every 6 numbers 0,1,2,3,4,5,10,11,12,13,14,15,20,21,23,24,25 etc. which means that 60 was a very easy number for them to represent.