by thatismynoodle
First off, let me say...OH MY GOD! :)
This story is very, very hot. Being your first submission, this doesn't seem like the work of a freshmen erotica writer. The situation was very erotic. The main character's inexperience was touching as it wasn't made humorous. Moreover, I enjoy any story where the woman is in control and not solely in the role of a BDSM Dom.
I'll be VERY surprised if this doesn't make it to the HOT list.
One thing is that I just can't understand why this made it to 'NonHuman'...Other than the title "Kitsune" I didn't see much that suggested the girl wasn't human.
First off I saw nothing in relation to kitsunes here. How this is non human I can't tell. Also I can't call this a story either, I'd say its a sensual and well endowed poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.