All Comments on 'Kitten In Heat'

This is a prime example of pure garbage writting at its best. The author doesn't have a single clue as to proper sentence construction. Filled with such bad things as "word ... word" and "word - word" so often the meaning gets lost or severely confusing.

Just, wow. I can't wait to read the next part.

Some possibilities. But "grinded" instead of ground at one of the high points of the story. Very distracting.

Amazing story ... please keep it cumming. And yes, you do need an editor, otherwise a brilliant effort.

Screw the editors,..and even the spell-checker. Your effort was hotter than the hinges on the doorway to hell !! I hope that you are a man of his word, and will grace us with the further exploration of 'Kitty's' subservient needs,...coupled with Steve's subtle guidance..... and sprinkled with wonderfully detailed accounts of driving sex with this hot vixen.

Your very first story made it to my favorites list....and I'm sure that I'll have to make room for your next one.

I normally just cherry pick the ones already marked "Hot", but I am SO GLAD I decided to check this one out. Nicely done. You've got my vote!

For me what makes for good erotica is a good basic idea and the ability to get the story to read smoothly. Grammar and spelling while desirable is not essential. Your story reads well and is full of energy.

Thanks for posting it.

Pete

Wow what is the last comment all about,(notice it is anonymous), if they want to make stupid comments like that at least show yourself! nice story thank you.....

This story was very well spelled, and it needed no editing, I applaud your style sir, and cannot wait for a new segment. I think you have excellent writing skills, as I felt as though I was in this story, rather than reading it. Kudos to you, please release another ASAP.