All Comments on 'Kitten Ch. 06: First Anal Experience'

Kitten doesn't sound real! I like her. You wrote the story in such a way as to be instantly enticed and charmed by her. I liked the way you described her sub / serving Master behavior. The downcast eyes, her stance, all that. (I will ask if my Dom would like to check me daily for wetness!) I like all the information you provided. The story flowed, had a beginning, middle and end. There also was some humor which is always a good thing. I laughed out loud!

There was one place that presented a continuity problem. You wrote about what was happening and then went back in time without cluing us in so it seemed a bit jarring. But otherwise, a very HOT story (but then, I like anal!)