by Red_Destroyer
Very fun, hot story. Loved how the New Kitty was so relaxed and enjoying life.
..although it could have been fleshed out a little more. How about a detailed description of the first threesome?
Group sex isnt on a whole a big fav of mine. However you have done a marlvious job with this one. Most in this genre lack personality and feeling and you gave the character both with a good dose of pleasure as well. I related to her which I can honestly say is rare in lit stories of any kind. While sex is always fun you showed a small understanding of the workings of a womans mind. That is a talent in itself.
I agree you could have more detail about the threesome would love to see a chapter on her change. Would be nice a little more of what she was thinking at the first party
Would love to see more from you in the future
It was a fun read, but you need to work a bit on setting scenes and continuity. For example, when Terry first mounts Kitty, as far as the reader knows, she is fully clothed. Was she wearing a short skirt? Did he pull her pants down? Anyhow, I am reading on, just to see where the story goes.