All Comments on 'Kitty Gets Naughty'

by Red_Destroyer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love the New Kitty!

Very fun, hot story. Loved how the New Kitty was so relaxed and enjoying life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very nice...

..although it could have been fleshed out a little more. How about a detailed description of the first threesome?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful

Group sex isnt on a whole a big fav of mine. However you have done a marlvious job with this one. Most in this genre lack personality and feeling and you gave the character both with a good dose of pleasure as well. I related to her which I can honestly say is rare in lit stories of any kind. While sex is always fun you showed a small understanding of the workings of a womans mind. That is a talent in itself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
would love to see more

I agree you could have more detail about the threesome would love to see a chapter on her change. Would be nice a little more of what she was thinking at the first party

Would love to see more from you in the future

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fun read

It was a fun read, but you need to work a bit on setting scenes and continuity. For example, when Terry first mounts Kitty, as far as the reader knows, she is fully clothed. Was she wearing a short skirt? Did he pull her pants down? Anyhow, I am reading on, just to see where the story goes.

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