by Anythingcanhappen
I loved it. You have a talent for capturing her innocence and desire.
Sorry, I will try harder to make the stories more accurate. I will also try to make the length and description better. Thank you for letting me know how you think. :)
I dated a Japanese woman in college, and like most Asian women, she does not have red hair, green eyes, or DD-cup breasts.
Mei does have brown-black hair, Godiva chocolate colored eyes, sensitive A-cup breasts supported by strong Coopers ligaments that sit up and smile at you, a tight, tasty twat and a ballet dancers figure.
I also remember telling Mei that she would age well after meeting the grandmother she was named after, who looks far younger than she is.
Water fountain to naked in three sentences. Slow down, develop scenes and characters. Keep writing. :-).