All Comments on 'Knick, Knack the Twinning is Back!'

by GooeyBoooooy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

You really sure there was any demand for this?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What the fuck

is this shit? Seriously. It is probably one of the worst stories I have ever read on this site. Holy fuck. Jesus. This. Is. Bad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Seriously

Was this written as a joke?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Aother Thing We Found Out About You...

That you should never submit another story to this (or any other writing site) until you A) Reach maturity (I'm thinking like 50ish), and B) learn the meaning behind the actual words that vomit out of your fingertips. You lost me at "Hanging off my downstairs." I don't want to call you a stupid retarded fucking cunt, because that would be very wrong of me, so I'll just tell you again, not to write/submit anything else until options A & B are met.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
payback

you should OWE stars for posting this rubbish.

JagnagJagnagalmost 7 years ago
Shite shite shite oh yea and more shite

You won the bet on this one

Jokes on us eh !!

If i was able to delete this i would as its that bad !!

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesalmost 7 years ago
I voted one star for this abortion of a story. Why? Because that's the lowest possible vote.

If I could have voted a negative number, I would have. And you struck me as a "one and done" kinda author (for "whatever" reason you use so), so imagine my surprise when I see you've got TWO stories, AND a POEM! But then I see the scores, and I almost, ALMOST, feel sorry for you. I mean, getting a 2-point-anything is embarrassing, but getting a score BELOW 2.0? Yeesh! Read the writing on the wall. Hell, read the writing ANY-where but your piece of garbage story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
AHHHHHHH IM LITERALLY CUMMING

Please keep me busting my hot steamy load for me😩

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Shit

I haven't read something shittier in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
this doesnt make any sense

????

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What the fudge

Dam..... And you started out so good and then it's like you took a hit of crack and the story went down hill from there,I pulled my dick out for nothing.BOOOOOOOO

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wtf

Im confused if the story is supposed to be in gay or straight sex?

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