by GooeyBoooooy
is this shit? Seriously. It is probably one of the worst stories I have ever read on this site. Holy fuck. Jesus. This. Is. Bad.
That you should never submit another story to this (or any other writing site) until you A) Reach maturity (I'm thinking like 50ish), and B) learn the meaning behind the actual words that vomit out of your fingertips. You lost me at "Hanging off my downstairs." I don't want to call you a stupid retarded fucking cunt, because that would be very wrong of me, so I'll just tell you again, not to write/submit anything else until options A & B are met.
You won the bet on this one
Jokes on us eh !!
If i was able to delete this i would as its that bad !!
If I could have voted a negative number, I would have. And you struck me as a "one and done" kinda author (for "whatever" reason you use so), so imagine my surprise when I see you've got TWO stories, AND a POEM! But then I see the scores, and I almost, ALMOST, feel sorry for you. I mean, getting a 2-point-anything is embarrassing, but getting a score BELOW 2.0? Yeesh! Read the writing on the wall. Hell, read the writing ANY-where but your piece of garbage story.
Please keep me busting my hot steamy load for me😩
Dam..... And you started out so good and then it's like you took a hit of crack and the story went down hill from there,I pulled my dick out for nothing.BOOOOOOOO