All Comments on 'Knobbing Nancy'

In general most of the world its "panties," not "knickers" that women wear. So the story would have more appeal using terms and language that's in wider usage.

knickers are the correct term when English. I really hate how americans think they are always correct. Get a life and travel some dude. The story was hot and very erotic

Very good, follow up please?

......and nothing wrong with the use of 'knickers' - unbelievable what some people moan about!

Wow! Three comments and it only went up this morning! Colour me impressed!

As for the first comment, yeah sorry about that. Whenever I use an American celeb I'm much more likely to use American spelling but as the story was based in the UK I used our spelling and our sort of vocabulary. I.E 'Knickers' instead of 'panties' or 'Arse' instead of 'ass'. Sorry if this detracted from your reading in any way :)

As for the other comments, there should be a sequel with Gloria and Nancy giving Ben what-for and I sort of realised that I hadn't given much back story on Nancy so maybe a prequel as well?

So, of course, they're knickers.

And, no, you didn't use too few adjectives. Most writers on Literotica use too many.

I enjoyed the mention of the man cumming on the woman's face but I wish you would have used a little more detail at that point! ;) Otherewise, this was a fun read. Thank you for writing it.

Good initial attempt. Was disappointed; had read half and told my wife at least you hadn't given her bra size, probably the most hackneyed descriptor in all of erotica, then there it was. Typically, where you did use adjectives was appropriate and worked, don't worry about them, instead try to make the transition from story to sex (i.e. behind the store) more gradual and plausible. Her dialogue could have been more thankful. Really like the end twist. Keep trying.

Not your best work, Dude, but well done.

I've been missing what makes your stories special... You used to tell stories with sex in it, but this time there was less story - at least for my taste.

It actually might be a good idea not only to write a sequel, but also a prequel, giving us the missing background intel.

Nonetheless again a good story of yours and I'm looking forward to read your next ones.

MaitreNuit

...any more chance of another episode with Ben, Nancy and Gloria....maybe some fun after work or some strip poker with the three of them?