All Comments on 'Knock, Knock...'

Spell-check.

Maybe also a editor to look over your work before submitting.

Otherwise an okay story.

Would have gelled better if polyandry or non - jealous multipartner relations were built upon.

that would have been an easier read with perfect English, but the fact that we were advised of that made it OK. I've read much worse grammar and spelling here by American English speaking writers.

I liked the story and hope that you'll write more. The Muy Macho Males will bitch about her "flipping a coin" as to who will be the father, but life is a gamble every day. I'd go for that experience, as I'm sure my wife would also.

Incredible!!!!!!!!!!!