All Comments on 'Knocking Down Destiny's Door Ch. 02'

nice

Nice work! ^__^

Among the very best.

both parts together deserve a ten stars!! thanks.....

... for heaven's sake, PLEASE at least run your story through a spell checker. So many misspelled words really took a lot away from your effort.

A maginificently woven tapestry of erotic fulfilment of lust.

Just one emotion left out the author's scenario.

Is it too romantic to feel that deep tenderness and affection of all the players be built up which would tighten the bond of the characters and produce an epic love story?

Absolutely brilliant story - red hot! Surely, there MUST be another chapter!?

There is absolutely no excuse for spelling errors in this day and age. Use spellchecker or use one of the many volunteer editors on this site.

Great story.Very hot. I would hope the author decides to continue this saga. There are so many hot twisted place it can go.

Great descriptive writing and visuals BUT the spelling is atrocious. Next time, take the next step and run a spell checker. You can do much better than this.

She has entered into a whole new life style, that seems to have rocked her very soul.

How will she ever live without the pleasures her two new lovers have shown her.

I would like to read more about the three of them and how they continue their new life.

Thanks for the read .

I guess that was what you were going for but a story can be passionate without the guy being an as-hole.

Got to agree with the call for you to use some help with your spelling or at least stick to words you know how to spell. Damn, that got so distracting.

It's OK, i'm not! I think your story reads well and I hope Collett finds an even more enlightening world in the future thanks to Destiny and Brennan. Why is it those with names comment about the writing, while those who remain anonymous do nothing more than complain about spelling! If that's all they want to do, find another website and go do it there!!

I haven't been here for a few years so its great to see you're still at it. Keep em coming dude.

that is an auto story dump and a 1 star...

Outstanding story. After 40+ years, Colleen finally knows what it is like to be a free, sexual female human being. No more self-imposed boundaries. 5 star series.

no, no, NO!