All Comments on 'Know Thyself Ch. 01'

I hope you will continue to write this tale.

I can't wait to see where you take this...

I like where you've been with this. Please do continue so we'll see how he gets either out of this or adjusts to it.

This is a different time travel being younger.

I like these type of stories but usually the guy comes back younger but still male.

This story should be interesting , to see how it plays out.

Keep writing, interesting concept.

Am thoroughly enjoying this story, can't wait for chapter 2.

Please write chapter 2

I like it so far. Good character development of the main character. He starts of as the pathetic yet sympathetic loner that is thrust into a crazy predicament. Good fantasy / sci-fi allows for one major item of suspended disbelief but the other parts have to make sense as in how someone would react to things, etc. Good start and I look forward to seeing more!

Thank you everyone for such great feedback! It's such a big motivation to be able to read all this. I'm currently working on chapter 2 and should be posting it in the next day or two. Thanks!!!

Can't wait to read more!!

Really nice story. I like the way you portray the inner thoughts and feelings of the main character. You give the reader a first-class seat. I'm looking forward to what will happen. Thanks.

Thank you everyone for such positive and motivating feedback! I have a rewrite to chapter two posting in the next couple of days. Thank you for taking the time to read my story.

At the top of the story, our hero looks into the fountain and sees lots of "bronze pennies". I don't know about in other countries, but here in the US (which is where this chapter is set), pennies are made of (mostly) COPPER. And in case you meant that the pennies were bronze-COLORED; No, they are copper-colored.

the beggining was great, but come on man, that thing of cuming thinking of a man was a total turn of

Based on chapter 1 I'm liking it so far. It's understandable to me why as Ashley she is having trouble adjusting to new thought processes. As content as I am being a male, I've often fantasized about a temporary body swap.

A great beginning to this story. I am just reading this for the first time, and I am looking forward to the next of 9 Chapters. It will be interesting to see how Ash learns the basics, at least, of how to be a woman. Is she a virgin? Is she on birth control? Too many questions at this time. I am glad that I am getting into this after the whole story is complete.

Good writing, good story. A couple of editing errors, but... big deal. I can't wait any longer for chapter 2.