by Moondrift
A very intimate and heartfelt tale of love and obsession. Another well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
It had an odd way of saying things, but it was necessary. I was actually curious on how the story would end, and even after... the Big Bang, I kept reading just to see how it ended.
I loved the plot twist, and the son's choice. Great story, overall.
I usually like your stories, but I detest this one. I know it is 'only' fiction, but the mentality it displays is quite disgusting - far, far worse than mere porn. Bad show.
I usually like your stories, but I detest this one. I know it is 'only' fiction, but the mentality it displays is quite disgusting - far, far worse than mere porn. Bad show.
I love all your stories, Moondrift. You're one of the authors I have under my "Favorites". The variety of topics you offer is astounding proving you've got a very vibrant and broad-scoped imagination.<br>
</br><br>I love coming back and reading your stories from time to time when I'm not busy writing stories myself, or when I need a break from them even as I continue my quest to improve upon my writing.</br>
<br>I really liked this story since it's so close to the truth of how things really can be. Although I enjoy fiction as much as the next person, it's nice to read some degree of truth in one every now and then.</br>
<br>Thank you so much for sharing your stories and please, as I tell myself as well, don't let the desk chair critics stop you from writing your wonderful stories. ~ Candlelight062