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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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No style. And the writing is marred by cliches, poor usage and little acquaintance with grammar. You need editorial help. Please get it.

It is interesting that very few Indian writers are well above average and a handful are outstanding. But the rest are mediocre. It is a pity.

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