All Comments on 'Krissy's Bold Plan Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Editor help!!!!!

Editors HELP fast as this author needs it seriously or to repeat grade school grammer again. Nearly every sentence contains at least one use of "..." or "word - word" thus killing the story and giving eye strain to anyone reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome -- look forward to chapter 3

Great work , Princess . Nice nice roleplay fantasy, and well-written, too . I look forward to chapter 3 !

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
re: Editor help

Your comments would carry more weight if you knew how to spell grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
awesome story

PLEASE continue soon!

RyleighM72RyleighM72over 10 years ago
More!!

Daddy NEEDS to fuck his little slut!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

next chapter?

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