by saucyminxy
Editors HELP fast as this author needs it seriously or to repeat grade school grammer again. Nearly every sentence contains at least one use of "..." or "word - word" thus killing the story and giving eye strain to anyone reading.
Great work , Princess . Nice nice roleplay fantasy, and well-written, too . I look forward to chapter 3 !
Your comments would carry more weight if you knew how to spell grammar.