Kristin Continued Ch. 03

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As the women, sometimes in heels, began to tremble with muscle tension, he walked behind the group delivering light, stinging swats to arms and legs. He demanded a dancer's grace and symmetry in the transitions. After two grueling hours of the first session, legs started cramping and movement slowed.

"We'll pick this back up this afternoon. I guess I need to add a workout room to our little school. Mia, take them out and get them started on the books."

In the room, Aisha and Anika slumped down in a chair and on the bed. Mia showed them three books: A photo spread depicting slave positions, a book on rope bondage, and a paperback titled, "The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty."

"You need to read these together and talk about them over the next few days. There are a few weird positions that will make you wonder. 'The Dying Cockroach' and 'The Upside-down Bicycle' are my favorites. Try them for a laugh, but take all this seriously. The novel is a good story about slave life, though I doubt you will ever experience as much paddling as this girl gets.

"I'll bring food in an hour or so and we can talk about your homework." She smiled.

Three days of practicing, reading, sleeping, and practicing to exhaustion flew by. The crucial day in four young lives loomed. One bit of prologue remained — the personal visit with the Boss.

Author's Note: Part 4 will cover the auction and her new life. I may decide to end the tale there. I don't like stories that go on and on until they jump the shark. Do you? Thanks for your interest, votes, and comments.
—Carole

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Carole99Carole99over 2 years agoAuthor

Dear Anon,

Hi, we appreciate readers who get immersed in the details of our stories.

Without actually saying so, I tried to make it clear that Carl did end up with Kristen. The last line is "Hello Darlin'." That is what he called her throughout the story. I left several breadcrumbs in the story. Kristin's high bid was from an outside source, after it was confirmed that Carl wasn't present.

Then Rose reveals, "...but I was on a mission, you know?" Soon after, Kristin has a dream, part of which is Carl talking to her: Sweating.... 'Aisha, you have a wet spot. Is that for me?'

Gasping.... 'Close your eyes and give yourself to me.'

Then, on the trip, Rose gave another clue: "My dear girl, I am only your proxy owner. I told you once that I was on a mission to get you. For various reasons, a friend of mine could not attend the sale and asked me to stand in."

Thanks for your comment. Feel free to reply on my page. You don't have to ID yourself.

Carole

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

why did you blew up carl he was awsome for her

Carole99Carole99almost 7 years agoAuthor
Look

for Chapter 4 in about a week.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Awesome

This was great. I see it hasn't been updated in while so I can only hope you plan to continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Can't wait

for chapter 4!

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