All Comments on 'Kristin'

loved the story... however there are errors of syntax and punctuation whose ommission would have made me grade it higher... it's easy to use the services of one of the voluntary editors on this site.. i use Hotti for my tales and feel that they have improved as a result... please don't feel wronged by my ctiticism... you're good at this... and could be better.. mostly don't stop..more, more, more