All Comments on 'K's Candy Ch. 001'

I sure hope you continue this :)

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great start to a great series! So many wonderful possibilities! Keep them cumin!

What's the point? You have a transparent beginning, and you set the environment nicely, but you leave your reader hanging. Like many, I enjoy a nice lead into a story. It's like a lovely drive to the beach... But, in this case, we never arrive!

I am neutral on the story so far- but giving you 100%+ on the photo- now I know that is male and sexist but the photo is fantastic. Definitely not "skinny". Now I'll read the rest of your stories

Those four words is chapter one in a nut shell. If the rest of the chapters are like this one it just might make a very nice Disney movie, with a "G" rating and everything.

This proves that anons are stupid, how did anyone learn to read and still be so childlike?