All Comments on 'K's Candy Ch. 003'

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candy_slutcandy_slutabout 18 years agoAuthor
More's on the way

Parts 4, 5, and 6 have been submitted. They take a little longer to get posted since they're Word files. Thank you for all the comments I've received so far. --candy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Best so far

This is the best chapter so far. Hope to see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Starting slowly

Starting ever so slowly- the sex so far needs much more detail and lingering. I'm hanging in there for your wonderful sexy looks.. and hoping that you will finally get to where you live up to your name. I am definitely in lust- but I do need more. Be kind to your admirers

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 7 years ago
Absolutely,

fucking, wonderful!

The short chapters in 1 & 2 were good, but I wondered if it might get to me in a negative way.

THIS chapter was brilliant!

I loved it all - the dialogue, the descriptions of what was happening, and the way you captured what she was feeling was simply delicious.

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