All Comments on 'K's Ninth Playground'

by Quezacotl101101

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sorry about this...

Kind of screwed the pooch on these K's Playground submissions. I submitted these years ago and due to errors in the speaking segments they didn't go thru properly. When I fixed these recently they all went thru as individual stories. K's Ninth, Tenth, and tomorrow, I believe, Eleventh go together with the Epilogue, which got published first. Completely my fault; hopefully you all will still be able to enjoy them. Thanks, Quezacotl101101

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well done!

I hate when a story just gets good and the author changes their tone at the very end of the story and then stops writing, so good job on continuing my story. That happened for me with the story Trouser Snake, a great one topi btw, but his chapter 2 just lost the same tone. Thanks for the note. I've messed up my password somehow so I can't continue writing, I've gone on to write in a different genre, so if you want to take over kate's playground, feel free. MYJIMMY

PS. I like where this story is going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very good story

The story should continue to where she agrees to have actual sex with her dad. She must overcome her reservations. Where the dad can come into her for the final hurray. She should be on the pill for the sex to continue.

For completion please add the other chapters 1 - 8

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