All Comments on 'Kyle and Sarah Ch. 01'

At least you wrote her honestly, slutty and whoreish

Why does every story that has a male dom female sub topic get blasted for the way it protrays the women? This is the most natural pairing of the sexes there is. The male is supposed to dominate the woman and I for one appreciate it when one is honest enough and not PC to say so.

Proud to be a slave

Panther's babe

A very interesting and well written first chapter with the promise of more to come. I liked the way you paced it, building intense sexual tension and keeping the reader guessing about what is to come next. I sense a kind of dominance/submission type relationship without it being traditionally BDSM, but where to from there...? I wait with eager anticipation. Kyle is a very complex character, one of those bastards who you don't necessarily like very much, but who keeps you riveted to the screen. I'll definitely be looking out for the next chapters!

Thanks for the great read!

Kyle is drawn as a genuinely creepy and sadistic man, and it is not likely to be a pretty descent for Sarah. Not for the faint of heart, but well written and steeped in the mind games of BDSM.