by MalePatternBoldness
I laughed out loud in places and am left...feeling rather happy. Ahem!
and she is exactly as described here. I have been crushing on her forever. This is my favourite story on the site.
Damn that was intense and HOT! The story was extremely well written, to the point I could've easily visualised the scenes, the characters...OMG my heart's pounding!
to say, after reading the blues story you wrote, I'm not surprised.
Both stories written very well. Much better than my proofing.
After the reading blues story, I'm not surprised.
I had a similar experience with one of my male teachers and this just makes me think of him. Unreal how I can see some of the same things. God I miss him after reading this . Loved it !!!
One of the better-written, extremely readable fantasies I've read here! Bravo!
This is wonderful. It is not only hot but also incredibly romantic. I was starting to get a little annoyed with her constant "OMFG" usage (I guess I am just too old - hmmph!) but these two made a great pair. Very nice indeed.
that was great, having had a few male teachers who were total hunks when i was a kid, i can really relate with the fantasy. too bad i was never old enough to carry them out, but thanks to you i think i know how they would have gone.
Not only great story but catchy beginning and real tight writing!
That is so hot. I cannot get these images out of my mind.
Loved it.
It's a good thing I'm not in high school anymore or else I would be stalking my teachers!!! So hot! =D
Of course, you realize this is going to make my return to teaching this fall this much harder... Absolutely outstanding.
This was so hot I read it twice! I wish I could have had an experience like that when I'd attended high school! Your writings are excellent! Boy, you got you some skillz!
I love it!
of this story please. There is nothing I can add to the comments made. You have written an exceptional story. I, for one, will be expecting many more stories from you!
Okay when I first started this I really thought I was getting into the dirty old man and young student type of thing, but you surprised me... this was tender romantic and everything an encounter such as this should be... there was nothing dirty and sleezy about it! Wonderful amazing job! Teach me to write like you, okay *grinz*
I read it with my grade 12 english teacher in my head and oh how I'd have loved to be in the same position. Pun intended.
Super job! Very erotic and enticingly built. Web chat was a "stroke" of genius!
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What a great story. I truly hope you write a sequel because I?d love to see what the future has in store for these two characters. BRAVO.
Probably the best teacher/student story I've read here in years. The only unresolved problem I have is that Mitch seems to be enthralled a bit more than sexually. Wouldn't mind knowing if you've got a future in mind for the characters. Is she just leaving for college and he's going to be alone again or do they have a future.
i only wish that happened with my english teacher in high school... absolutely fantastic plot, and very well written
For me it was Christi Morgan, I never had the session detailed so well here, but I would have liked to. Well done.
Erotic, tender, and oh so loving! This is very well written and just the sort of encounter that almost seems plausible. :) Good job!
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