All Comments on 'Kylie and Brooke Ch. 01'

by The_Office_Fan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
few details

Awesome story so far, a few details I would like to see in future chapters would be Kaylee becoming completely bare down there, and also some anal play between the sisters. Overall amazing story and hope next chapter is posted soon.

DocErotic3DDocErotic3Dover 7 years ago
Great Story!

Hope to see more very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
GET IT RIGHT!!!

LESBIAN! Wasted my time!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved it!

Beautiful and erotic story! Cannot wait to see how things progress!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
re: GET IT RIGHT guy

What is that guy's problem? The description is "Kylie's big sister visits from college." Kylie is a girl's name; what the fuck did you think the story was about? Please consider switching to decaf.

Good story, The_Office_Fan. Most of us look forward to future submissions in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I do not know all the complaints of other readers - what did they expect a family orgy?

Two college age girls tend to experiment with girls

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 6 years ago
Loved it!

Wow, very good first chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next! thank you for sharing it with us!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
My favorite story so far, please write more

Amazing

The_Office_FanThe_Office_Fanalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Next chapter

Thanks for all the good feedback! Just in case anyone didn't see there is a second chapter, I just accidentally put it in the lesbian category, not sure if I can change it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. The second chapter ruins it though.

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