All Comments on 'Kylie's Cups Ch. 01: First Gaze'

Seems as if it could go somewhere, but no indication of where yet.

I agree with the other comment.. Very interesting story and I like how it's going. Should had been a bit longer and you could had added a bit more teasing between Kylie and James. Looking forward to the next installment!

Liked the pacing and how it was written. Hope to see more.

YOU NEED TO GIVE US MORE

More, please!

This is a good story. Now I am a lesbian so hetero sex or even the potential of hetero sex don't turn me on. However, I can see the potential of you(I am assuming this is coming from a first narrative perspective) having sex with her because I see that "you" probably have a thing for her, especially her boobs. I hope that it goes that direction. At least before Kylie and James get together which I know will probably happen eventually.

Love the way this is going — the psychology of the narrator is really compelling and erotic.

Really good beginning, it looks like it's been a little while but keep going the hard part is over (the beginning :p)

Any chance of a part 2??