All Comments on 'L & C School Ch. 02'

Again your story is good but may I give a bit more advice? I find your punctuation generally lacking and this makes the story difficult to read. Before you submit your story, read it through with a pencil in hand. By reading it out loud the errors will leap off the page.

Wow girl, you had me drooling over you, just want to be part of your action

Sure sweetie, you may need to correct some spelling and grammar, but the story line is really great. You sure know how to get a girl turned on. Cum on Aussie????