All Comments on 'L/J's (A One Week Chronicles Story)'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Masterfully crafted

Such a well written tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
As Always Amazingly Well Written

I have to say though that this cut me to the core. I have come to love these characters and to see them so cruelly murdered is not sitting well right now. I can't wait to see how this story ends(sigh :-/ ). It has been a great treat to read and I will be longing for more for quite some time. I hope that you can find the time and inspiration to start something else dealing with Trans Girls. Your insight into the psyche of people born in the wrong body is nothing short of uncanny and the care with which you deal with this subject matter is to be commended! The sexy bits are OK too ;-).. Thank you for all your effort in posting FREE stories. Wish you all the luck in the world with your future works even if you never post another story here.

Most Sincerely,

Rikki B

Louise69Louise69over 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks Rikki B- it was hard to kill some characters but I wanted the last 2 chapters to have weight and real stakes for the reader. Besides, I left a clue in the opening about how many died that night...

Thank you also for your continued support and kind comments.

Hugs

Louise xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
tears and laughter and love

i could't agree more with rikki b comments more . thank you so very much for your stories you post here. i so very much wish you all the best for your future endeavours. as i am trans your work means so much.xoxo ( ps i can't wait for more !! ).

Joann69Joann69over 3 years ago

Love the story just who died

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