- Erotic Horror
- La Vendetta
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"Ah, Maria...some women learn lessons easily, and some take a bit of the twisting of the wires to get their attention. Perhaps after tonight you will think again before you scorn your Signor Balsamo for his missing parts?"
"Come, Maria, drink a bit more tea. It will fortify you. Is it too bitter? Here, let me add just a little more 'special sugar'. It will do the trick."
The Count obligingly held the delicate porcelain teacup to her rosy lips and filled her mouth with tea. She sputtered, but swallowed, her eyes filling with tears.
Maria couldn't protest, she had no voice. Only the terror in her eyes registered she was even alive.
"Ah, look Maria! Your eyes are sparkling! Tonight you will be the belladonna of the stage. Of course, tomorrow the critics will say your acting was a bit 'wooden' but what do they know?"
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI miss the words to give your story the praise it deserves. I was drawn right into your story by your wonderfully vivid descriptions and superbly characterised protagonists. I must confess that I absolutely loathe puppets, so I was positively horrified.
A splendid, splendid story, I would definitely love to read more from you, your artistic use of the written word is a pleasure to read!
Bravo!
Anonymousover 15 years agoso incomplete! Why does the castrati want revenge? Surely not just for her showing off her womanly charms periodically without gratifying him. What of the performance? What will the Count have her doing that will be so humiliating? Does her husband see the performance? Also, hardly erotic — a few mentions of a lover, a few vignettes? Charming tale, nonethe less.
SlaveNanoover 15 years agoLoved this story, the setting, the twist and the sense of the bizarre just appealed to me. Maybe because my own mistress has tied me up and used me as a puppet made the idea appeal to me! Thanks for submitting.
