All Comments on 'La Vita Dolce Ch. 01'

by DuskyGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Really ( Really) Good!!!!!1

I really enjoy the first chapter. I can't wait to read more. It's very interesting to find out what will happen next. I hope you can update ASAP.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Oooohh....

very interesting first chapter. cant wait for the next chapter......but will.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
So far, so good....

definitely looking out for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I Love this story so far

Great job. I can't wait to see where you go with this story.

DuskyGirlDuskyGirlabout 17 years agoAuthor
AUTHOR HAS MOVED/NEW MEMBER NAME

i had a problem with the varification codes for my DuskyGirl member name. it was taking forever to figure out so i just got a new name it's "theDuskyGirl" and the second chapter of La Dolce Vita will be there once approved. thanks for all the feedback and love!!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
White hot beginning.............likes it!

This was an exceptional start to a piece. I love all the colors in your palette. The descriptions are rich and flavorful. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Where's the Rest?

Quite a tease of an opening... please write more - quickly!

Suzanne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
continue!!

I don't understand why you stopped! This was a good start and I would've loved to read more.

Anonymous
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