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All Comments on 'Lace and Love Ch. 03'

by vaultdweller111

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Needs proof reading or an editor

Not a bad 1st installment, but the mistakes and omissions heavily distracted from the story.

Do not be concerned, we all do it and this is why you always get folks to proof read your text (the more the better).

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