All Comments on 'Lace Club: First Day Ch. 01'

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JadestoyJadestoyabout 7 years ago
Interesting and good start

But you should get a editor and check for misspellings

BYKERLADBYKERLADabout 7 years ago
Interesting

Enjoyed your story hope there is a part two

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Enjoyed It...

...right up to, "I lied on the massage table..."

Didn't your mother teach you not to tell lies?

(Try, "I lay on the massage table...")

kinky_samanthakinky_samanthaabout 7 years ago
great story

this is such a great story, very sexy. Thank you so much.

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