by jealouscuck
If you go post tbere you you might find a friend... you really won't here
Your crap is only laughable. Maybe its your kind of communication!! Like wham bam!!!
very good story , keep going, don't take any notice of the loser who keeps posting,
Her husband isn't a rocket scientist, he's sexually inept, and every other man she know's is bigger than him - so why did she marry him?
And NOT in a good way. A couple of really unlikable characters. Nothing clever or entertaining. Just a really disgusting story.
1 star
The author did a very poor job on this story.
This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, low context, poor written and this story is not even hot nor sexy. This is such waste of time reading all the way through.
Sorry, but I find nothing here but betrayal and manipulation. Where do we find evidence of her love for Jeff, every move she makes seems calculated to manipulate him into what she "wants".
Hahahahahahahahahah.....hahahahaha Oh my God hahahahahahahahahahahaha.
This should have gone into Humour! 1* (perhaps I should have read a bit further, might have been even more hilarious.)
God I love these stories, there's nothing more satisfying knowing that your wife is getting the fucking of her life by huge cocks when you know that you can't satisfy her with your own small pencil dick. Nothing like the taste of a Creampie
What waste of time reading all this garbage.
This story is so nonsense, pathetic, poor written, low context, wimp and pure lame.
Perhaps the writer would have better chance to publish this garbage in the T&C and/or Gay session rather than LW session. The LW readers usually do not appreciate gay guys pretending they are wimp husbands looking for big cocks to clean the loads of cum out of their STD cunt wives.
1* for this shit.
Why would a cuck be jealous? Doesn't that defeat the purpose of be a wimpy, limpdicked , low life, cuck?
Note a bad story, thought you could have explored more of Jeff's training and no doubt having Jeff watch and clean Lacy up afterwards. Also maybe seeing Lacy get another three cock experience or maybe more than three.
As many stories as you have written, I'm sure you just kick those anonymous naysayer comments to the side and keep on writing. It was obvious to me where this story was going, so it seems pointless to read something you don't enjoy. I did enjoy the story. I thought it was very erotic. My only criticism would be Lacy was a little too quick to take on 3 guys at once. But that didn't keep me from giving your story 5 stars. I like stories that are easy on humiliation and heavier on compassion. I think there is a sequel to be written. Looking forward to that