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Adam told me that the brothers still had nightly gang bangs for about a month and then the house went on sale.
I did call Joan, the waitress at the Radisson hotel. I let her know what the outcome was and she asked what the secret was that I wouldn't tell her. I told her about the early pregnancy test and switching the birth control pills to placebos. With all that sperm for two weeks, she was going to have a black baby.
Joan said, "You are nasty. I'm going to treat my boyfriend real nice. I don't want to be unknowingly forced to have any color baby. I do want to see you again...with my boyfriend there." I chuckled and said, "We'll see how things go."
We both laughed and she said if I stopped by for dinner, she would be sure to give me the VIP treatment. She said, "I sure don't want you mad at me."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months ago4 for the writing ability; 2 for the illogical plot and character development.
I know that all wives in the LW category are supposed to succumb immediately and irreversibly to the "BBCock" experience and to forget every other aspect of their lives except stuffing their cunts with cocks and cum. Perhaps it's a factor of the male fantasy that maybe somewhere somehow a woman will just look at THEM and throw themselves on their backs with legs spread to be fucked out of their minds.
I don't begrudge them the fantasy but could we just lay off the racist aspect once in awhile?
Keep writing--just maybe something a little more logically erotic next time.
MLJ
EvelZombieabout 1 year agoWas a fun bit of fantasy, I enjoyed it. I'd have to look up the laws to see if the husband then ends up in prison for the birth control stunt. But a wild story with a wild BTB ending. About right for this genre
Anonymousover 2 years agoOnly a sick and deviant mind could find any enjoyment in this trainwreck...1⭐
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis story had more going on than one may catch at first glance. With the early indications that hubby would like to see her doing some kinky stuff with another man (men?) I thought for sure this story would go the old "Cuck" route - he finds out, he gets mad, he is hurt and then his dick is hard so he forgives her and gives the OK her her whore behavior. BUT - I was wrong, he is not a Cuck and develops a clever revenge plan and introduces the idea that Trust is equally (or nearly so) important as to whether the injured party can forgive their spouse and continue a marriage or not. Sure they discussed her having extramarital sex but with the understanding that the planning, selection of partners and scope of the event would be decided by both of them together BEFORE acting on it. It was clear to me that our hero's pain was the deception and lying and perhaps her going too far into decadence (27 man gangbang, etc) without any input from him that set him on a course to divorce and retaliation. He seemed to resist as the pillow talk between them went from one man to two men and very possibly he would have not signed up for she elected to do, he never got a say in that plus HE was to be a part of this fantasy not left at home while she played. She likely worried he might put a stop to her expanded fun so his participation was sacrificed so no interference to her exploits was possible. Had she told him of her affair right away it's likely he would have come around and participated, maybe even allowed her to be serviced by three at a time, but she chose deceit instead.
Now some say this story isn't realistic, he wasn't sad enough, why the hotel waitress and why did he treat her so harsh? Well excuse me but we're not reading Shakespeare here ! Even Rod Serling used bizarre circumstances in stories. Come on man - lighten up, read & enjoy without the attitude. 5 *s
