All Comments on 'Ladies Cocktail Night Ch. 01'

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ManosHands over 10 years ago

Nice beginning!

Is this your first entry? Great job! I'll move onto the second part and add some more comments. Looking forward to it!

masterandmargarita over 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks!

My first entry indeed. Ch. 03 pending, editing Ch. 04, writing Ch. 05.

PusLik about 10 years ago

Fantastic

Great story really erotic!

Anonymousalmost 10 years ago

amazing

Simply incredible. Please make more.

luv2cumhard4u over 9 years ago

Incredibly Hot!

So well written. Keep pumping out more...so I can as well!

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Great story

So thoroughly enjoy stories when girls get together...

djrip over 1 year ago

This is one of the first stories I read here, years ago. It's still so great! A classic beginning to one of the very best series I've seen. The visuals are so crisp and detailed. The pace is unhurried, the play, extended. Perfect! (What happened to chapter 5? It was awesome.)

InfiniteXaos over 1 year ago

Very hot! But they shouldn't have left him out on the shower, he should have joined them.

masterandmargarita about 1 year agoAuthor

InfiniteXaos ch. 02!

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