by SRound
One of the best romantic gender-benders I've read. I initially wanted Sam to stay a girl, but the way you finished this... amazing. Thank you.
A great story, I love the journey that you take Sam on, the story is perfectly interwoven with the great erotic scenes, just top-shelf writing
I have never felt so engaged in a story, and I couldn't stop reading! It was an incredible journey that felt, despite its unimaginable course of events, completely real and natural. I was a bit dissapointed to hear more about Sam and Carrie, but I agree that you wrapped it up beautifully. 10/10, thank you for sharing your talent!
Not a bad story, but I think it would have been better if Sam found out Carrie was a lesbian, then ran back to the old lady to ask her to turn him back into a girl. LOL. XD
I wish I could find this old lady. I would never turn back to a guy. ;)
I usually don't leave comments on this site, but I have to say that this is an amazing story. I was legitimately moved by it and I was also impressed with how well you tied up all the loose ends. Great story all around.
Came for faps. Got super dope love story. Not sure how to feel about that. 5/5.
Sometimes I'll just read something to get off, like one of the other comments here said, but I'm honestly blown away by the amazing story you have here. The grammar is impeccable, the storyline is wonderfully well written, nothing feels overblown or cheesy, and it's quite the length of story in comparison to a lot I've found here. It's such a honest and deeply moving love story, I'm impressed, and while this is just somebody random on the Internet, I'd like you to know that you wrote something amazing. :)
Thank you for sharing your story, it was an incredible read, something I may come back and read again sometime. It's definitely a polished gem among the common rocks.
I didn't even masturbate to this, it was a truly amazing love story and moved me to tears wowowowowowowow
This was amazing i didn't even fab to this i was going to but the story wrighting caught me of guard its amazing how you wroth the story. I dont realy read much but this i couldn't stop this is by for the best story i have read. I now feel like i miss something amd thets is only when i like dometing this is again an amazign story
I really enjoyed your story, and was surprised to find myself moved on top of being aroused! Please keep up the great story telling!
I normally just pick any random story to read but this one really caught me off guard with the quality of the writing and the emotional storyline! Very good stuff, keep writing!
I agree that this one caught me off guard. I really enjoyed it. The perfect ending!
This was a great read! Wasn't sure what to expect but you threw in some really meaningful plot twists. Couldn't stop reading.
I honestly picked this thinking to get a good wank session in before going to sleep. I started reading this at 11:57 pm and I haven’t been able to put it down till now at 1am. This story truly moves you and teaches people a lesson (as well as keep you aroused the whole time).
Out of any book on this entire site I always come back to this one the most. Your writing is exquisite and you paint a really detailed picture of the story. Keep on writing!
I’m so blown away I’m not sure what to say...just a fantastic story and so well written, especially the most intimate scenes, where you felt like one of the characters, feeling exactly what they were feeling. Masterful. I look forward to reading more from you.
I loved it. The writing. The story. The characters. The detailed experiences. Reading this story made me so happy and turned on and feeling love. You are a master writer and I appreciate what you have created with every part of my heart. Thank you for working on this and sharing with the world.
Lovely story. I had tears in my eyes when it finished. You have a talent.
Others have already said it in these comments, but it's true. A wonderfully written story. A classic tale really because the golden rule of life prevails, one should treat other people the way you wish to be treated yourself.
Great ending, was expecting something on the lines of lesbian love to happen, looking forward to see your next work!
A great story. I lived vicariously thru both female and then male Sam. Thank you ❤️
Great story. I guess there are a few people on this site that can write. I love the details, his friends, burning them, the sex, Carrie, Russels BBC, the twists, the ending. I've got to read this again! Where the fuck is my rabbit?
I'm going to cum ten more times rereading this, imagining variations on this story. Oh, fuck yeah....:)
Magnificent story. I think I fell in love with Carrie right away. This story is truly a gem.
Ordinarily, I would try to use my best "voice" to write a comment, but I can't do that here. This was a fucking great story! I loved every second. Not to say there weren't a couple of points where I was worried about your protagonist, but that made the resolution that much better!
This got the follow!
You wrote a wonderfully sensual and intriguing story. I was rely into Sam as a woman and all that she learned about people. I also loved her experiences with Russell and learning about really good sex with a strong but sensitive guy also with great equipment 😉 I do have to say that I was a bit disappointed that Sam dropped Russell and then accepted being a guy again. I understand loving Carrie and all that but I was hoping for her to stay with Russell since I felt myself falling for him as I read their encounters and relationship. I wouldn't have minded seeing Carrie being invited into their lives also to love and be loved by them both. That us what I would have chosen as Sam .. of course I am looking at things from a woman's viewpoint and I am Bi also, so I would want them both. Great writing that had me in the moment from the beginning. Tiffany
Came here to jerk off but ended up genuinely enjoying this story. I have been a bit lonely for a while, hopeless about my chances of finding the right girl in a world of broken and misguided people. Who knew a little perspective, let alone from an erotic story, would give me the hope I needed to get out there and find my own Carrie. Thank you!
I've never read a transformation story before and was closed-minded about them so I'm very glad I gave this one a chance. It is a beautiful, wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing SRound!
I've been a regular visitor to Literotica.com since I first discovered it in the early to mid 90's. I couldn't even begin to guess at how many stories I've read & enjoyed on this site but it's a very large number. That being said, I wanted to take this opportunity to write a comment, something that I'd never done before this one. This, by far, is the best story I've read on this site or any other for that matter. It was extremely well written. I'm no literary expert and do not possess the talents to properly express how well your story was penned. Perhaps if I may paraphrase Justice Potter Stewart, "I can't define greatness, but I know it when I see It". Thank you for your words. I thoroughly enjoyed reading them.
I didn’t know what to expect when I started reading this. I was both surprised and at times confused but a great story, very well crafted was what was presented.
I only wish this had an AU branch where they decide to stay with Russell. Personal wishes aside, great story.