All Comments on 'Ladies Night In'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Short but nice...shaving

That could be a good series. Thanks for sharing

KY XtianKY Xtianover 15 years ago
Slightly unrealistic - STILL HOT

Doesn't seem like it is a likely scenario, but something you just gotta go with it. It's a hot fantasy none the less, and made for a great wank story.

KY XtianKY Xtianover 15 years ago
Slightly unrealistic - STILL HOT

Doesn't seem like it is a likely scenario, but something you just gotta go with it. It's a hot fantasy none the less, and made for a great wank story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OK - keep trying

This shows some promise. Keep developing your characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
whers the heat

needs a lot of work hass very heat. wheres the passion, even a first timer there should be some heat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
it could be better

tell more about your characters and it would be a overall better story but still very hot

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