All Comments on 'Lady Bird'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
When she left him

He decided it was time and he walked out. They never saw him again. The end to an incredibly bad piece of writing.

rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 9 years ago
Pay no attention to "anonymous"

This one snarky ass does this all the time. I liked it and hope you have more chapters!

JenniferWilsonJenniferWilsonabout 9 years ago
Well I liked it

Good job of story telling, I hope there is more to come.

Jennifer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Perfect genre piece

Very well written! At the end it made me wish for more.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good premise.

But ends much too soon.

And an editor is really needed.

Four stars.

Anonymous
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