All Comments on 'Lady Catherine's Fall Ch. 01'

Nice beginning to the story... the plot and characters are good.keep developing the storyline and you will have a great story. continue writing the story.

...and I really liked your mentioning 'the Lady Catherine, which, as the daughter of an Earl, would be the correct address.

Well done on all counts - 4 *s and I hope to read more very soon about milady's adventures.

Thank you for a most stimulating read.

Well crafted storyline laced with 'erotic' development potential. This tale produced an interesting twist on alternative capital punishments, worthy of sexually imaginative exploration in literotica submissions, as Catherine develops her masochistic revenge? Leave no stone unturned, humiliating Fowler by subjecting him to 'stark naked' servitude within her newly acquired 'CFNM' household. Alternatively; Castration might well become possible, turning him into a personal 'Eunoch' servant, with no breeding capabilities whatsover! IE: Avenge her 'former male' admirers, showing no mercy? The possiblities in your story are endless!

Excellent tale, yes I will read more when you write it.

I loved the romance writing. I hope you continue this.

A very good story - well written and in a most becoming style - thank you