All Comments on 'Lady Goodnight's Evil Sluts Pt. 03'

Just have it as a plain seductions story instead of gibberish and it would have been muchbetter.

Not the best one of the series, helps when you picture David Beckham as Ray though!

Overall the series is excellent, the first two tales more so however.

You're a great writer. Would have liked a little more info about the sex scenes but great plot and dialogue.

Fantastic. Now for part 4

Excellent series, please continue this...I thought this was the best chapter so far. The transformation/swap parts are great, reminded me of a Jack Chalker story.

It's the so called "gibberish" that makes the story special. seducedhylas, you have a great vocabulary. You have a terrific sense of what makes a Jezebel story fantastic. Your setup was superb. I wish Ray's actual conversion had been a wee bit more drawn out, but you had already invested so much time in making the story, I'm just glad you got it out. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you!

I knew, as I was writing this story, and indeed the series, that it wouldn't be everyone's cup of tea. I wanted to test myself a bit as a writer and experiment with the boundaries of this little niche genre. I fully expected critical or mixed reviews but to call it "gibberish" is just plain insulting, lol

Hylas

p.s "Just stick to plain seductions (sic) stories"- I'll do what I want, no one's asking you to read it. Ta muchly xxx

This is far from gibberish. Also, please send Hayley to my house.

Hey SeducedHylas:

This story is phenomenal as all your stories are. My only criticism . . . don't make us wait so long for the next chapter! Great work!

Great job! Ready for Chapter 4.

Hope you haven't given up on this series. Was looking forward to meeting Lady Goodnight and the rest of the hero team. Please keep going.

Great series, would be nice if you continued it./ I have to say though... your superhero names suck, except for Sotto Voce.

Well, I for one thoroughly enjoyed your writing style, plot and superhero names. Honey von Trapp. Lol I must admit because of that name I pictured Ray more as Captain von Trapp (Christopher Plummer - sexy beast ;) in my head when I read it (Beckham - yuck!) since we’re sharing. Lol But anyways. 🤷🏼‍♀️ 😊

I would love this author to return with some more stories. Only really TheTalkMan writing these female seductress stories at the moment. We haven't had anything with Lady Goodnight yet, so the author must have had more stories planned in this series. The same sentiments wrt the other series too. Love the idea of the Jezebel's society, secretly weaving their evil web with the sole aim of breaking up happy loving couples. Though I would never condone this in real life, the thought of being aggressively pursued by a smoking hot woman/or women in this way is a big turn on for me, because it will never happen lol!!